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AI Script Doctor

Diagnose the story problem before rewriting the page.

Review structure, character drive, scene function, pacing, theme, and dialogue with a diagnosis-first workflow that turns vague notes into prioritized, executable revision choices.

Root-cause notesScene-level evidenceRevision priorities

Opens the LlamaGen storyboard project workspace.

A precision optical lens resolving disconnected screenplay scene cards into a clear cinematic cause-and-effect chain

Northline / visual direction

One story world, carried from screenplay to production.

A precision optical lens resolving disconnected screenplay scene cards into a clear cinematic cause-and-effect chain
First pass
Diagnosis
Evidence
Scenes + beats
Outcome
Prioritized revision

Get notes you can act on

Understand the story problem before rewriting the scene.

Trace pacing, character, dialogue, or structure symptoms back to their dramatic cause. See which scenes are affected and test the smallest revision that can strengthen the story without flattening your voice.

Structure and pacing diagnosis

Inspect causality, escalation, reversals, midpoint pressure, climax setup, and sequences that repeat rather than advance.

Character and scene function

Test wants, tactics, consequences, relationship pressure, value turns, and whether each scene changes the story.

Executable revision plan

Prioritize load-bearing changes, show the affected location in the draft, and preserve the writer's voice and intent.

Screenplay pages marked for a focused story diagnosis beside scene and visual evidence
Worked exampleExample: The diagnosis connects a repeated safe tactic in Scenes 28–34 to a concrete revision and a new visual test.

Worked example · Example diagnosis

“The second act is slow” is a symptom—not a revision plan.

A stronger diagnosis connects the feeling to a mechanism: the protagonist repeats the same safe tactic after the midpoint, so pressure never forces a new choice.

  • Root cause: tactics do not escalate
  • Location: scenes 28–34 after the false victory
  • Prescription: remove one safe option per scene

The workflow

Doctor the mechanism, not the writer

Move from symptom to root cause, then test a focused prescription against the rest of the story.

01

Name the symptom

Start with the felt problem: slow middle, passive protagonist, flat conflict, confusing turn, or on-the-nose dialogue.

02

Locate the root cause

Read the outline and relevant scenes to find the missing choice, pressure, setup, tactic, or value change.

03

Prescribe and verify

Propose a prioritized revision, check its downstream effects, and use a visual beat or storyboard when staging is part of the problem.

FAQ

Practical answers for the next draft.

What does an AI Script Doctor analyze?+

It can help review structure, causality, character desire, scene function, pacing, setup and payoff, stakes, theme, subtext, and dialogue—depending on the problem you ask it to inspect.

Is script doctor feedback the same as rewriting?+

No. Diagnosis identifies a root cause and suggests a focused prescription. The writer decides whether and how to revise the actual screenplay.

Can visual storyboards help a script diagnosis?+

Yes. When a problem involves staging, spatial clarity, visual repetition, or missing escalation, a beat board or rough storyboard can expose the issue quickly.

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